Sorry but blogger has done it again. It seems I can't attach a picture to my blog now. No matter life goes on. Today I wanted to let you see my query letter in the hopes that you will assist me by giving my your critique. This will be a great help for me in putting my best foot forward. In my last blog I had everyone vote as to the title of the book. I listened and changed everything accordingly. Please let me know what you think.
KEYS TO POWER
When his father and brother are assassinated, it leaves Tilva the contested ruler of the planet Suvino. Four Keys to Power control the four countries on the planet and his Family government had all four until the day of betrayal. He holds one of the four Keys to Power. Unfortunately, many suspect Tilva to be a murderer, and the upstart dictator is using their anger to destabilize Tilva's government.
When Tilva's remaining brother is also assassinated, it turns the conflict interplanetary. The brother's ship arrives at Earth with its occupants slaughtered, but Earth's authorities are hungrier to exploit the ship's technology than to find the killer. The problem is, they can't unlock that technology without the help of Suvino's government-and there are two governments. Siding with the wrong one, will bring the conflict to Earth.
Obtaining the other three keys is the only way Tilva can stop the bloodshed and avenge his family. But as conspiracies ensnare his advisors, Tilva is forced to place most of his trust in the woman next in line to seize his power. When coerced to follow his brother's ship to Earth, Tilva knows he will either find the answers he needs-or walk right into an assassin's trap.
Please let me know your thoughts, comments, and critiques.
And remember... Always stay in your write mind.