tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417182613765834910.post2587193240871701390..comments2023-11-06T10:10:06.874-08:00Comments on O' about that... Orlando Ramos: Eliminate most adjectives and adverbsOrlandohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10103458688711351378noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417182613765834910.post-43765816224368727442013-02-18T06:41:19.599-08:002013-02-18T06:41:19.599-08:00Would "The daisy's opened their smooth wh...Would "The daisy's opened their smooth white petals.." or<br />"The daisy opened its smooth white petals.." make more sense? To me "daisy's" implies plural when it's singular.As in the smooth white petals belong specifically to this one daisy.<br />Either way you have given me food for thought.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3417182613765834910.post-47261855098495779852011-03-07T13:39:07.969-08:002011-03-07T13:39:07.969-08:00I agree with you on both counts: description can a...I agree with you on both counts: description can add a new element to your scene, but less is always more.S.A. Larsenッhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06241633272588383935noreply@blogger.com